ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences

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Adult ESOL Core Curriculum (DfES 2001) > Writing (W) > Writing sentence focus (Ws) Grammar and Punctuation > Grammar > Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences

Component skill and knowledge and understanding. 
Adults should learn to:
Example of application and level Sample  activities
Write using sentences consisting of a main clause and one or more subordinate clauses. Understand that more-complex writing involves the use of sentences consisting of a main clause and one or more subordinate clauses Write a narrative, report, description or letter, using sentences consisting of a main clause and one or more subordinate clauses.
The village where I grew up was very small and did not have a doctor so if you were ill you had to walk or ride six kilometres to get to the nearest clinic. I can remember when my sister was stung by bees and my brother ran all the
way, carrying her on his back.
 
  • Learners identify and underline complex sentences in a text and translate one or two examples of each into their first language of literacy. They then discuss and compare the word order and the different types of complex sentence they have underlined, e.g. sentences with relative clauses, subordinate clauses, if-clauses.
  • Learners fill the gaps in complex sentences with connectives expressing contrast, reason, etc.
  • Learners look at examples of ellipsis and then, where ellipsis is possible, delete words from sentences in texts that they have written.
  • Learners read a short text that includes a dialogue. Then as a group they turn the dialogue into reported speech.
  • Given the first half of a text, learners examine it in order to discuss the notion of ‘a complete sentence’, i.e. how to decide when to end a sentence. Next, learners are given the other half of the text, which contains some long ‘sentences’ (which are actually several sentences strung together with commas). They identify them and either split them into separate sentences or join them correctly, e.g. with a conjunction.
  • Working from a range of formal and informal texts, learners make comparisons about sentence construction by answering questions, e.g. Is a writer more likely to use the contracted form of the verb in formal or informal texts? In which register would a writer tend to use more noun phrases?
     
Use a range of connectives (e.g. as, if, unless, so, as a result of that, even though) to express contrast, reason, purpose, condition, consequence; using ellipses; using prepositional, adjectival and adverbial phrases to show time, manner, degree, extent, frequency and probability
Use conditional sentences  
 Understand and apply conventions of reported speech  
Understand that complete sentences should not be strung together with commas to make longer 'sentences', but should be either left as separate sentences or correctly joined, e.g. with a conjunction  
Recognise the importance of word order and punctuation in complex sentences, and use this understanding to avoid ambiguity  
Select a sentence structure suitable for the text, e.g. know that informal texts are likely to use a contracted form of the verb and include colloquial expressions; more formal ones are likely to have verbs written out in full, include more nouns and noun phrases, more complex modal phrases and more use of passive.

Write an e-mail and formal letter around the same subject:
Hi Sarah
Can’t make the party on Saturday. Hope you get loads of prezzies!
Love, Maria xxx
 

Dear Ms Scott,
I am very sorry but I will not be able to attend the Adult Learner’s Week Award Ceremony as I work in the
evenings.
I hope the evening is a great success.
Yours sincerely, 
Maria Presao

Write a factual account of a process, using the
simple present passive:
Wine is produced in many countries. The grapes are harvested in the autumn, when the grapes are ripe. For red wine, the grapes are crushed immediately after picking…

Source: Department for Education and Skills (2001) Adult ESOL Core Curriculum, DfES (2001)

Related Adult Literacy Core Curriculum links: Ws/L1.1 Write in complete sentences, Ws/L2.1 Construct complex sentences
Related Functional Skills English links: FE L1.25 Write consistently & accurately in complex sentences, using paragraphs where appropriate

22/01/2023 22:30 (GMT) Errors fixed on page 1 and PDF file replaced

Worksheets to practise zero, first and second conditionals while using the language of social media. Can be used as an introduction to conditionals or a revision exercise. Then a reading text using conditionals in context of a social media site to practise reading comprehension, purpose, tone, features of text and dictionary skills.

Editor's notes

Level
Entry Level 3
Level 1
Level 2
English
FE E3.9 Identify, understand & extract main points & ideas in/from texts
FE E3.10 Identify different purposes of straightforward texts
FE L1.9 Identify & understand the main points, ideas & details
FE L1.12 Recognise that language & other textual features can be varied to suit different audiences & purposes
FE L1.14 Understand organisational / structural features use to locate relevant information
FE L2.19 Identify different styles of writing & writer’s voice
ESOL
ESOL Rt/E3.1a Understand how meaning is built up in a variety texts of more than one paragraph
ESOL Rt/E3.2a Distinguish between different purposes of texts at this level
ESOL Ws/E3.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/L2.1a Use a range of sentence structure which is fit for purpose
ESOL Rs/L1.1a Use implicit & explicit grammatical knowledge to predict meaning & check for sense
ESOL Rs/L2.1a Use implicit & explicit grammatical knowledge to help follow meaning and purpose of different texts
ESOL Sc/L2.4a Express statements of fact
Context
Art Film Media Music Radio TV
Social Media

Based on Maggie Harnew's Halloween Complex Sentences resource, this resource is aimed at Entry 3 ESOL students working towards the City and Guilds ESOL writing assessment, but may also be useful for Level 1 students.  Students look at examples of complex sentences and answer some questions about them. Finally they are asked to complete some complex sentences, as in Task 1 of the C&G assessment. 

Level
Entry Level 3
Level 1
Level 2
English
FE L1.25 Write consistently & accurately in complex sentences, using paragraphs where appropriate
FE L2.28 Construct complex sentences consistently & accurately, using paragraphs where appropriate
ESOL
ESOL Ws/E3.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
Context
Faith & Religion

This handout describes the basic sentence types as used in the English language. It can be used to introduce or reinforce the concepts.

Editor’s note
This also makes a useful handout / reminder for vocational teachers who are embedding Functional English.

Level
Entry Level 3
Level 1
Level 2
English
Adult Lit Ws/L2.1 Construct complex sentences
Adult Lit Ws/L1.1 Write in complete sentences
Ws/E3.1
Ws/E2.1
Ws/E1.1
ESOL
ESOL Ws/L2.1a Use a range of sentence structure which is fit for purpose
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/E3.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/E2.1a Construct simple and compound sentences
ESOL Ws/E1.1a Construct a simple sentence, using basic word order & verb form

A first person autobiographical account of life in outback Australia.
Exercises include comprehension questions using when, where etc.
A revision of past tense verbs – regular and irregular.
A fill the gap using the correct verb tense.
A writing prompt for students to write about themselves – emphasising the use of conjunctions and short paragraphs.
A Wordsearch.
Includes a glossary of Australian words used in the text.

Level
Entry Level 3
Level 1
English
Adult Lit Wt/L1.1 Plan and draft writing
Wt/E3.2
AL Wt/E3.1 Plan & draft writing
Ws/L1.2
Adult Lit Ws/L1.1 Write in complete sentences
Ws/E3.2
Ws/E3.1
AL Rt/L1.1 Understand continuous texts
AL Rt/E3.1 Understand longer texts
ESOL
ESOL Wt/L1.1a Apply genre-specific planning strategies as appropriate
ESOL Wt/E3.2a
ESOL Wt/E3.1a Recognise the process of planning and drafting
ESOL Ws/L1.2a
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/E3.2a Use basic sentence grammar accurately
ESOL Ws/E3.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Rt/L1.1a Understand how meaning is built up in paragraphed texts
ESOL Rt/E3.1a Understand how meaning is built up in a variety texts of more than one paragraph
Context
History, culture, museums, libraries

A set of resources which explains the use of conjunctions and worksheets to practise using them correctly. Eight common conjunctions are covered in 5 different worksheets, along with a useful handout and a related word fill puzzle to check understanding.
Mapped to Entry Level 2 Functional English and E2-L1 Adult Literacy

Level
Entry Level 2
Entry Level 3
Level 1
English
Functional English - writing
Adult Lit Ws/L1.1 Write in complete sentences
Ws/E3.1
Ws/E2.1
ESOL
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/E3.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/E2.1a Construct simple and compound sentences

Information and examples of modal verbs followed by a cloze exercise and sentence writing.

Level
Level 1
Level 2
ESOL
ESOL Ws/L2.2a
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Sd/L2.2c Express views, opinions, feelings, wishes
ESOL Sc/L2.3a Make requests
ESOL Sc/L2.2a Respond to criticism & criticise constructively
ESOL Sc/L1.2a Make requests
ESOL Rt/L2.4a Understand and identify how written arguments are structured

Passive verb forms is a useful 1 page reference sheet for L1 and L2 ESOL (and tutors).

Level
Level 1
Level 2
English
Rs/L2.1 Use implicit and explicit grammatical knowledge
Ws/L2.2
ESOL
ESOL Rs/L2.1a Use implicit & explicit grammatical knowledge to help follow meaning and purpose of different texts
ESOL Ws/L1.1a Write using complex sentences
ESOL Ws/L2.2a